Mostly sketches. Occasionally a painting. Nothing political other than caricatures reinforcing the truism "Politics is Show Business for Ugly People".
Excellent handling of the added detail on the flyer. It supports the main shapes without distracting from or overwhelming them.I like the idea of seating a figure on the flyer. Hope to see it fleshed out next version.
Nice improvements. The two shapes in the joystick area bother me. I'd say lose the thin stalked , bulb at the top shape. I don't think we can clearly know what it is. It also has an anti stream line shape that makes it seem very "kluged" on. ( I first heard the word kluge at Leland Corp.)
Very nice! Nice job of "plussing" them out. I don't feel the need to see a whole figure on the bike--I like the urgency of the stick man--but then, I don't possess "art-director think."And I disagree with Ellis; I like the sex-toy aspect.
Maybe draw a little highlight gleam over the roll bar. And I disagree with Marty for disagreeing with me.Maybe on the REMAINING joystick, have the side closest to the driver be a smooth curve, vs the knobbiness
Wonderful stuff - can't thank you all enough for pointed these things out! I think the piece still has a cartoony feel to it.. which I'm going to try to avoid in the next vehicle.Thanks again amigos!
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