Here's the second version.
The grayscale with seated figure needs a better figure, but it's there to proof the idea.
What sez yah's - More crits please!
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Mostly sketches. Occasionally a painting. Nothing political other than caricatures reinforcing the truism "Politics is Show Business for Ugly People".
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Excellent handling of the added detail on the flyer. It supports the main shapes without distracting from or overwhelming them.
I like the idea of seating a figure on the flyer. Hope to see it fleshed out next version.
Nice improvements. The two shapes in the joystick area bother me. I'd say lose the thin stalked , bulb at the top shape. I don't think we can clearly know what it is. It also has an anti stream line shape that makes it seem very "kluged" on. ( I first heard the word kluge at Leland Corp.)
Very nice! Nice job of "plussing" them out. I don't feel the need to see a whole figure on the bike--I like the urgency of the stick man--but then, I don't possess "art-director think."
And I disagree with Ellis; I like the sex-toy aspect.
Maybe draw a little highlight gleam over the roll bar. And I disagree with Marty for disagreeing with me.
Maybe on the REMAINING joystick, have the side closest to the driver be a smooth curve, vs the knobbiness
Wonderful stuff - can't thank you all enough for pointed these things out!
I think the piece still has a cartoony feel to it.. which I'm going to try to avoid in the next vehicle.
Thanks again amigos!
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