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Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Give me better

Thinking about my web comic design.
Main recurring title wording would be

UNCLE GOGGLE"S TALES BEST READ WITH...

PITILESS EYES

 

Maybe not 'best read'. Maybe just 'read.'

UNCLE GOGGLE"S TALES READ WITH...

PITILESS EYES

 

UNCLE GOGGLE"S TALES FOR...

PITILESS EYES 

that's probably best 'tales for'

PITILESS EYES

Uncle Goggle's tales of horror


 
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6 comments:

  1. Tom Moon10:32 PM

    Last one is the best - shortest and simplest wording.

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  2. MrGoodson28:13 AM

    Thanks Tom. I was editing as I posted and the last one came to me as I posted. Simple is always best. Looking forward to seeing that on a web page.

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  3. Davis Chino3:12 PM

    Ha! This is great. I wouldn't even mind reversing the order: "PITILESS EYES: Uncle Goggle's Tales of Woe"...follow yr old "Idle Hands: The Art of Ellis Goodson" naming convention.

    PITILESS EYES...ha!

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  4. MrGoodson25:41 PM

    Hey. I like that Marty.

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  5. BDMontag5:53 PM

    4 works best for me.

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  6. MrGoodson28:18 PM

    Thanks Ben. Tomorrow is thumbnail madness day. I'm going for a record. Anxious to see it on the web.

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