tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18751429.post6791907517727149730..comments2023-10-21T05:56:16.979-07:00Comments on Mold Breaker: CommissionMr Goodsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11990879366082004882noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18751429.post-13911008829185128832014-07-17T16:52:25.350-07:002014-07-17T16:52:25.350-07:00Elz, they ALL look great--but I wonder if you aren...Elz, they ALL look great--but I wonder if you aren't maybe over-analyzing some of this?? Or really, just questioning yrself too much?? <br><br>They ALL look great. But very interesting to see what bugged you about the first image and how you changed it....<br><br>'Cuz of all of 'em, I like the first one most (sorry!!) The wider format makes his pose more active, I think...the perspective reads fine to me, in some ways I'm less distracted by the detailing on the surface that is meeting your doorway on the left and upper portions of the frame....and the action of the hand coming forward to work the wrench in the 1st go is for me the most satisfactory--it may read as a little cartoony upon close inspection--but I don't know that anyone's gonna look that closely at that sort of secondary element?? And for my money it gives us more action and clarity, and depth--at least to me.Davis Chinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168954208679712542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18751429.post-11664038596048386192014-07-17T13:04:36.662-07:002014-07-17T13:04:36.662-07:00I just don't draw enough any more. Drawings th...I just don't draw enough any more. Drawings that could be considered illustration. I doodle.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18751429.post-65361581189327119772014-07-17T08:24:49.121-07:002014-07-17T08:24:49.121-07:00Wonderful drawing Ellis. Your writer friend is luc...Wonderful drawing Ellis. Your writer friend is lucky to have a resource like you.Tom Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11624247648988106639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18751429.post-28414717308330857322014-07-17T01:29:21.427-07:002014-07-17T01:29:21.427-07:00Love it! He looks very happy, with a can-do kinda ...Love it! He looks very happy, with a can-do kinda aura. You make trolls look so contented.<br><br>Love the simple yet oh-so-strong shadow scheme, too!Davis Chinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168954208679712542noreply@blogger.com