Or a neon outline of a burger connected to Eat at Joe's. I wonder what is going on. It's city lights, congestion, but not Times Squarey or Tokyo-y. The things in neon are so innocuous. Like urban decay in Pleasantville. Is this a montage scene of some sort, the guy flying through the whole city in one panel? It works that way.
Thanks for the feedback guys. You are right about the burger. A bit too detailed and over-rendered. I'll try to find a way to pull it back. As to this being the first in a big series of drawings, I wish it were so, but alas it is not. Since the last big set of drawings I did, the "Raymond Fantasia" stuff, I have only managed to complete three or four finished drawings, (not counting daily, doodly sketchbook entries.) But I will explain what I have been doing for the past ten months or so in the nest post.
Yay! Very cool. Are we about to get a big roll out? I hope so.
ReplyDeleteThe burger could be eliminated I think. Maybe half of it behind the coke bottle
ReplyDeleteOr a neon outline of a burger connected to Eat at Joe's. I wonder what is going on. It's city lights, congestion, but not Times Squarey or Tokyo-y. The things in neon are so innocuous. Like urban decay in Pleasantville. Is this a montage scene of some sort, the guy flying through the whole city in one panel? It works that way.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback guys. You are right about the burger. A bit too detailed and over-rendered. I'll try to find a way to pull it back. As to this being the first in a big series of drawings, I wish it were so, but alas it is not. Since the last big set of drawings I did, the "Raymond Fantasia" stuff, I have only managed to complete three or four finished drawings, (not counting daily, doodly sketchbook entries.) But I will explain what I have been doing for the past ten months or so in the nest post.
ReplyDeleteNEAT! I love this character design... classical, but the head treatment is so stylized and cool. Dig the mix.
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